IELTS AcademicWriting Task 2OpinionBand 9.0

IELTS Writing Task 2 — Space Exploration: a Band 9 sample answer

Updated 25 August 2026 · 2 min read · ieltspractice.app

'Money spent on space would be better spent on Earth' is a classic Task 2 question that never leaves the exam. This Band 9 sample shows how to avoid the lazy answer (dismissing space entirely) and write something more intelligent.

The question

Some people argue that spending money on space exploration is unjustifiable while poverty, disease and environmental problems remain unsolved on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Band 9.0 model answer

Hover the highlights:Task ResponseGrammarLexical ResourceCoherence & Cohesion

Every rocket launch invites the same question: how can we justify reaching for Mars when so much remains broken at home? The contrast is emotionally powerful, and I share the instinct behind it. Yet the argument rests on a false choice, because money is not the only thing space programmes produce — and not the thing Earth's problems lack most.

It is true that the sums involved are staggering, and that a rover's budget could fund thousands of vaccinations. If the choice were genuinely 'rocket or vaccine', the rocket would be obscene. But national budgets do not work this way. The countries that fund space exploration are not refusing to fund healthcare; both are financed, and cutting one would not automatically swell the other. Politics, not astronomy, decides what the poor receive.

Moreover, space programmes repay their cost in terrestrial currency. Satellite networks — the unglamorous backbone of the field — guide disaster relief, forecast harvests and connect remote clinics. The technologies spun off from space research, from water purification to medical imaging, circulate through ordinary life. And there is a harder-to-price return: a species that explores retains its ambition, and the scientists inspired by a launch often end up solving decidedly earthly problems.

In conclusion, framing the issue as space versus suffering is satisfying but false. The real question is not whether we can afford to look upward, but whether we can organise ourselves to care for what is below — and that challenge will not be met by grounding the rockets.

Why this scores Band 9.0

Task Response

The writer agrees with the concern but rejects the conclusion — a sophisticated position that engages the exact claim ('unjustifiable') rather than a straw man.

Coherence & Cohesion

Each paragraph answers the previous one: concession, then rebuttal of the logic, then positive case, then synthesis. The argument has momentum, which is what 'progression' means in the descriptors.

Lexical Resource

High-level but natural phrases — 'emotionally powerful', 'a false choice', 'terrestrial currency', 'unglamorous backbone' — show a writer choosing words, not reciting them.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Counterfactuals ('If the choice were...'), inversion for emphasis and a closing dash construction are all handled without a single slip.

Useful vocabulary

unjustifiable
impossible to defend as right or reasonable
a false choice
presenting two options as the only ones when more exist
staggering
shockingly large
spin-off
a useful secondary product of research
unglamorous
not exciting or attractive, despite being important
to swell
to grow larger

Frequently asked questions

Is it risky to disagree with the question's premise?

Not if you engage it honestly. Acknowledging the emotional case before dismantling the logical one shows exactly the critical thinking Task Response rewards.

Do I need to know facts about space programmes?

No specialist knowledge is needed. General, accurate references (satellites, disaster relief, medical imaging) are enough — never invent missions or figures.

Can I argue the opposite side?

Yes, and the same structure works: concede space's benefits, then argue opportunity cost. Either position can reach Band 9 if developed.

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