IELTS AcademicWriting Task 2Advantages and disadvantagesBand 9.0

IELTS Writing Task 2 — Work and Careers: a Band 9 sample answer

Updated 8 April 2026 · 2 min read · ieltspractice.app

This essay weighs the advantages and drawbacks of working from home. A Band 9 answer here balances both sides fairly, develops each with concrete detail, and reaches an honest verdict rather than sitting on the fence.

The question

In many countries, an increasing number of people now work from home rather than in a traditional office. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Band 9.0 model answer

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Working from home, once a rare perk, has become an everyday reality for millions since the technology to support it matured. Although the shift brings real drawbacks, I believe its advantages clearly outweigh them for most employees and the firms that employ them.

The most obvious benefit is the time and money saved by abandoning the daily commute. A worker who once spent two hours crawling through traffic can now reinvest those hours in family, exercise or simply rest, and the saving on fuel or train fares is considerable. Flexibility is a further gift: parents can collect children from school, and tasks demanding deep concentration are easier in a quiet home than in a noisy open-plan office. Employers gain too, since they can recruit talented staff regardless of where those people happen to live.

The disadvantages, however, are not trivial. Isolation is the most serious; without the casual chatter of an office, some employees feel lonely and disconnected, which can erode both morale and creativity. The line between work and private life also blurs, tempting people to answer emails late into the evening and quietly burn out. For younger staff in particular, learning by watching experienced colleagues is far harder over a video call than across a desk.

On balance, though, I am convinced the gains are greater. Most of the problems can be eased through occasional office days and clearer boundaries, whereas the freedom and lost commuting time benefit workers every single week. For the majority, home working is a welcome change worth keeping.

Why this scores Band 9.0

Task Response

Directly answers whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, gives a clear main idea in the introduction, develops both sides, and confirms the verdict in the conclusion with reasons.

Coherence & Cohesion

Moves logically from benefits to drawbacks to judgement. Contrast is handled smoothly with 'however' and 'On balance', and each paragraph stays focused on one theme.

Lexical Resource

Natural and varied: 'crawling through traffic', 'erode morale', 'quietly burn out', 'casual chatter'. The vocabulary feels natural rather than memorised.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Confident use of relative clauses, contrast structures and a range of tenses. Sentences vary in length for rhythm, and accuracy stays consistently high.

Useful vocabulary

commute
the regular journey between home and work
flexibility
the ability to change or be changed to suit different needs
isolation
the state of being alone and separated from others
burn out
to become exhausted by working too hard for too long
morale
the level of confidence and enthusiasm a person or group feels
boundaries
limits that separate one thing from another, here work from private life

Frequently asked questions

Does 'outweigh' mean I must pick a side?

Yes. When the question asks whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, you must give a clear verdict. Discussing both sides but never deciding will limit your Task Response score.

Should I give equal space to advantages and disadvantages?

Roughly equal is ideal, but your conclusion should make clear which side you find stronger. Balance the discussion, then commit in your judgement.

Can I use contractions like 'don't' in the essay?

Avoid them in Task 2. Academic writing prefers full forms such as 'do not', which keeps the register suitably formal.

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