IELTS AcademicWriting Task 2Discuss both views and give your opinionBand 9.0

IELTS Writing Task 2 — AI and Human Teachers: a Band 9 sample answer

Updated 9 May 2026 · 2 min read · ieltspractice.app

A Band 9 response here gives fair, developed treatment to both sides before settling on a clear personal view. It avoids sitting on the fence: it weighs AI's reach against what only a human teacher provides, then commits.

The question

As artificial intelligence tutoring systems become more capable, some people argue they will eventually replace human teachers, while others believe teachers will always be essential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Band 9.0 model answer

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The rapid improvement of AI tutoring tools has revived an old question in a sharper form: can software actually teach, or merely deliver information? Some are convinced machines will make teachers redundant, whereas others insist the human element is irreplaceable. Having weighed both, I believe AI will transform teaching profoundly but never fully replace the teacher.

The case for replacement is not trivial. Modern AI systems can explain a concept twenty different ways, mark work instantly, and adapt to each learner's pace without ever tiring or losing patience. A student in a remote village with a cheap phone can now access tutoring that, a decade ago, only wealthy families could afford. For sheer scale, availability and personalised drilling, no human can compete, and it is reasonable to expect AI to absorb much of the routine instruction that currently fills classrooms.

Yet teaching has never been only about transmitting facts. A good teacher reads the room, notices the quiet student who has stopped trying, and knows when a struggling child needs encouragement rather than another worked example. They model curiosity, resolve playground conflicts and offer the kind of trust an algorithm cannot earn. These relational and motivational dimensions sit at the heart of education, and they are precisely what software, however clever, cannot replicate.

On balance, I am convinced the future is collaborative rather than competitive. AI will shoulder the repetitive grind of explanation and assessment, freeing teachers to do what they alone can do: mentor, inspire and care. Far from making educators obsolete, the technology should let them become more human, not less.

Why this scores Band 9.0

Task Response

Both views are explored with real, balanced development and the writer's own opinion is given in the introduction and repeated in the conclusion, meeting every part of the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

Each paragraph has one clear main idea; contrast is handled smoothly with 'whereas', 'Yet' and 'On balance', creating a smooth flow of argument.

Lexical Resource

Exact and varied vocabulary ('personalised drilling', 'reads the room', 'repetitive grind') used naturally, with strong word partnerships and no awkward repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Confident use of complex and compound-complex sentences, participial phrases and contrast structures, all without mistakes and with skilful punctuation.

Useful vocabulary

redundant
no longer needed or useful
personalised
adapted to suit one particular person's needs
relational
relating to how people connect and interact with one another
transmitting
passing information from one person to another
collaborative
involving people working together towards a shared goal
obsolete
out of date and no longer used

Frequently asked questions

Where should I put my opinion in a 'discuss both views' essay?

State it clearly in the introduction and restate it in the conclusion. Examiners want your position to be obvious throughout, not hidden or introduced only at the very end.

Do I need to give equal space to both views?

Roughly balanced treatment is ideal. You can lean slightly towards the view you favour, but never reduce one side to a single dismissive sentence, as that weakens Task Response.

Is it fine to use a current topic like AI in my examples?

Yes. Up-to-date, relevant examples strengthen your essay, provided they are accurate and you explain how they support your point rather than just naming them.

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